Persausive Essay

A major concern in my community that should be changed is the condition of the sports fields. Almost all of my friends, teammates, and coaches agree with me that some action should be taken. These fields have been in bad condition long enough and it’s time we make a change! First, the current fields we use now are a perfect place to get a serious injury. Athletes run on these fields, but don’t …

…there are many talented athletes in this community, but the bad field conditions are restricting their ability to perform. For these reasons, we should make an attempt to fix up the fields for sports teams to play on. Almost everybody would be happy, and it might make Palmyra look better in sports than we ever did before. This is an opportunity that we can’t pass up, and we can use this to our advantage.