Narrative Essay for English 101. Teacher wanted lots of descriptive words and clear thesis and restatement.

I decided to take on the enormous challenge of breeding fascinating freshwater angelfish. I started by finding distributors to purchase a male and a female with the colors I would like the young fish to have. When I found the parents I liked, I set them up in a small, but tall tank, because angelfish like tall aquariums. I placed in it a heater, a sponge filter, and also a piece of slate, for the …

…had full and healthy eggs and fry. I discovered that breeding angelfish is very enjoyable, and rewarding, but by no means a simple task that I would nonetheless recommend to every aquarium hobbyist. The immense time and tireless effort that is required to successfully mate two compatible fish is well worth it when results are seen. I am left with a deep sense of accomplishment when I see what I have helped to create; Life.