"The Internet as an educational tool is highly overrated." Do you agree?

The glorious era of old print media dominance is over, and the era of cyberspace has taken over. The proliferation of Information Technology has given rise to the newest bloodless revolution in mankind in the field of knowledge and information dissemination, the Internet. The Internet is a network that provides quick and effortless access to the largest global information database available, the World Wide Web. When tapped correctly, the internet has the potential to become …

…weren't mature enough. Reading my essay again, i realise that what she said is somewhat true, though i've no idea how to improve upon my essay. I would be eternally grateful if someone could point out my flaws, comment on how i can improve my lack of maturity in my essays etc before my A-levels in Nov. Thanks a lot! Bibliography: http://www.musicteachers.co.uk/journal/index.php?issue=2000-11&file=editorial