Critique

This critique is divided into three sections: structure, content, and positive attributes. On the basis of structure the essay is not of high caliber. This is primarily because the thoughts within each paragraph did not correlate to the topic sentence. Within each subtopic the paragraphs supports were also separated and organized poorly. The introduction and body paragraphs of the essay seem to be decent for the situation and time restrictions enforced. They both have an …

…period where I have developed most it has been this year where I learned how to structure my thoughts and ideas. The introduction does state all the essential information such as the author, piece of work, and a valid thesis statement. The thesis statement was broad too the point that it could be considered vague. However, what it clearly mentioned was in the body paragraphs that followed. It is also important to note that the