Facing It. - Creative Writing poem and Analysis

Facing It Her day has started, her eyes are open<Tab/> The buzzer rings, it's time to learn. As time passes, she switches classes, The sermon bores her, her eyes start to close.<Tab/><Tab/><Tab/> "Take the bus, Grab your lunch, ...Don't forget to lock the door."<Tab/><Tab/> She's …

…sentences at the beginning to emphasize the drastic change of emotions in the second paragraph. The second paragraph was meant to be the climax of the entire poem; the point at which the reader should feel the most association to what the character is going through. At this point, the reader should get a rushed, tense, and/or stressed feeling. Point of View: The end of the poem switches from 3rd person to 1st person.