Reader response to an Essay.

Is Email the Future of the Family Feud? "In the article "E-mail: The Future of the Family Feud.", the author, Candy Schulman, believes "modern technology is affecting human relationships."(509) She believes that technology, E-mail specifically, is destroying human relation ships. She tries numerous times to convince the reader she is credible, but falls short many times. The author does not use the elements of argument well enough to make her argument convincing. While her claim …

…Had she included several more examples from her own life or those of friends or acquaintances, she may have had a more credible stance. Although I believe that many people may agree with her position, in order for her to have a valid argument she needs to include more evidence supporting her claim. Works Cited Schulman, Candy. "E-mail: The Future of the Family Feud?" Elements of Argument. Annette T. Rottenberg. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin's, 2003. 509-510.