"Rollerblading on Juan's Birthday" A creative writing story.

This was to be a 600-900 word story that takes place in a short amount of time. The dialogue might seem awkward, but the grandparents have an accent. It was a warm, breezy day, and my brother, Juan's 9th birthday. I was sitting on a couch across from him, with my parents standing beside him. He was tearing at the colorful wrapping of his birthday present. "Juan, Juan, do you have any idea of what …

…laid down in bed and pulled the comfy, inviting covers up over me. The smell of burnt candles was still in the air. I could hear the laughing and talking in the living room. There was a knock on the neighboring wall. It was Juan's way of saying goodnight. It truly was a good night...I had no scrapes, no bruises-no stitches or aches and pains. It was a great ending to an adventurous day.