The car crash! This is a short story that i wrote for my GCSE this particular one got graded a B

Joni woke remembering that she still needed to get out of the car her last thought before she'd fell unconscious, even though the bright lights stung her eyes her headache worse than before. She pushed her self up onto her elbows, groaning quietly at the pain that suddenly shot down her arm in response to this movement, though she couldn't tell whether they were cut or bruised. Trying to open her eyes Joni squinted at …

…an ambulance, I didn't think that you was still alive" The man explained. "Thank you" Joni replied, looking at him for the first time noticing that he could be no more than 18. He had dark eyes brown or grey with longish dark which was ruffled and matted with mud and dry blood 'probably mine' Joni thought, his face full of small cuts and bruises defined his boyish features. He shrugged shyly smiling "It was nothing"